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No tomorrow

Started by burning_acid, February 02, 2007, 22:08:34 PM

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burning_acid


As purifying as it might be,
your love is nothing but ennui.
And you stand tall, right next to me - 
what is expected of my soul?

You know  - I loved you strongly once!
But you were somewhere, out of reaching.
Your love was then my only chance
to be a decent human creature...

I was all yours – my mind and body
were in your hands. But you denied it...
Blind for my love, for my affection...
Nevertheless, you killed my senses!

And then I cried, I wept, I murdered
all pure emotions, moral, virtues.
I shut my eyes for greatest beauty
and started living out of duty.

Just then you came near to my doorsteps.
You wanted back my love so restless.
You wanted me – my kisses, blessings
but I was cold – with your brain messing.

Now you will fade, just like you made me
deny all faith in love, pretending
that there's no pain, that soon, one fine day
I will forgive forget your blindness...

But I'm still here. I still remember
you treating me as I didn't matter.
So you will feel now all my sorrow
For you, my love, there will be no tomorrow!


Това ми е един от първите опити за стих на английски, така че бъдете снизходителни  [shame]  :)
И все пак - чакам критики  [inlovee]
И лошото държи да ни се случи, и хем е страшно, хем е много стилно.
Когато да пропадам ме научи, защо не каза как завършва филма?

black embrace_f

Perfectly well!!! :)
Congratulations, burning_acid!!!
Хареса ми много! Особено края. :)

burning_acid

Quote from: black embrace_f on February 03, 2007, 14:32:08 PM
Perfectly well!!! :)
Congratulations, burning_acid!!!
Хареса ми много! Особено края. :)

Хиляди благодарности!  [inlovee] [inlovee]

А края...се роди съвсем спонтанно, и всичките ми познати са изненадани (дано приятно :} ) от него  [lol]
И лошото държи да ни се случи, и хем е страшно, хем е много стилно.
Когато да пропадам ме научи, защо не каза как завършва филма?